Fallen angel- 2nd draft

We have improved our OTS by adding in the soundtrack and voice overs, we have also added our credits that I have done a previous post about. We recreated some scenes as the acting was poor and it was reflected in the feedback we got on our last draft, having feedback made it a lot easier to find and fix faults in our OTS. This version also includes our studio ident that I created and Jack edited, we are both very happy with our studio ident and think it links the OTS to the film noir genre.

NEXT: We are going to create a survey about our OTS and use social media to show it and to collect survey responses, we are going to put the survey and Vimeo on both of our Facebook profiles and Twitter accounts, we decided to use social media as we both have a lot of followers on both and we wanted to show it to a bigger audience than our media class like we did previously.